Choti Buzz: Amar Apu (part1)

Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Amar Apu (part1)

Hi bondhu ra. Ami Tamim. Tauhid Islam Tamim. Aj apnader sathe ami ja share korte cholechi seta k kono golpo bole dhore nile besh vul korben. Ghotona ta amar boro apa ke niye. Amar boro apar nam Nadia Islam Tamanna. Ami daki Tami apa. Amader baba ma r dui vai bon niye chotto poribar. Ghotona ta aj theke sare 10 bochor ager. Gazipur shohortoli te thaktam amra. Chotto tiner chaler ektola bari. Abba chilen elakar kazi. Valo porichiti chilo elakay. Tami apa chilen elakar sera shundori. Misti mukh,potol chera sundor boro boro chokh,dudhe alta gayer rong r medhin lomba ekhara shorir. Chuler khopa khule dile komor chariye jeto ghono kalo lomba chul. Ami tokhon class 4 e. Apa jatiyo university te. Ekdin bikele apa kadte kadte varsity theke firlo. Abba basay chilen na. Ami khub obak holam kintu apa amake kichui bollo na. Amake onno ghore jete bole ammu k nijer ghore deke nilo. Ami prothome chole geleo ektu por eshe daralam pordar arale. Kadte kadte apa ja bollo ammu k,ami shune voye shitiye gelam. Elakar gunda Arafat vai naki apa k varsity theke ferar somoy ajebaje kotha boleche. Amma shune to voyei osthir. Apa r o bollo j Arafat vai naki boleche j barite janale naki apar khub khoti korbe. Voye ammu r apa baba k kichu janayni. Erpor ekbochor chole gelo.
Er majhe Arafat bodh hoy r apa k uttokto kore ni. Apa r ammu o bisoyta vule gelo. Apa bodh hoy rate shobar age chule tel diyechilo. Misti gondho aschilo apar chul theke. Hothat dorojay kora narar shobdo. “Ami dekhchi. “Apa batita rekhe uthe gelo. Dorja khule ditei apar chitkar. “Ei!Ki korcho!Ma go!Tamim!”Ami chute gelam. Ja dekhlam tate voye atta shukiye kath hoye gelo. Arafat vai r tar dui bokhate bondhu. Amar apa ke joriye dhore chumu khaoar chesta korche Arafat vai. Tar dui bondhu dorjar opashe hashi hashi mukhe darano. Kalo lomba cheletar hate ekta tala. Apa k chere diye Arafat vai tala ta niye bollo “Tora baire thak. Keu jeno na ashe!”Dorja ta bondho kore diye Arafat koray tala mere dilo. Apa voye thorthor kore kapchilo. Ami chup kore dariye chilam. Kemon gholate lagchilo charpas. Peter vitor jeno kichu ekta pak khacchilo. Arafat vai amar dike takiye hashlen. “Ki choto shala?Khub moja na?”Ebar apar kane kane ki jeno ekta boltei apa gungiye uthlo. “Na please na!” Arafat vai Tami apar hat dhore hir hir kore tante tante abbu ammur bedroom a niye gelo!Apa jore jore kadchilo. Ami chute gelam. Arafat vai amar dike khuni chokhe takiye bollo “Tor bon er sathe ami ghonta khanek thakbo. Bahire amar dui bondhu pahara dicche. Tui ulta palta kichu korar chesta korle ekebare jane mere debo!Ekhon ja r ei room asbi na. “Arafat vai amake ber kore diye dorja bondho kore dilo. Ami sthanur moto dariye roilam. Prochondo kanna pacchilo. Boddho ghorer vetor theke amar apar kanna r Arafat vai er kotha shona jacche. Ki bolche bujhte parchi na kintu apar kanna berei choleche. Ghore telephone o nei. Amar vishon kanna peye gelo. Aste aste apar ghore giye balishe mukh guje kede fellam.
Kotokkhon par hoyeche jani na. Bodh hoy minit kuri. Aste aste uthe daralam. Chokher jol muchte muchte bondho dorja tar samne ese thellam dorja ta. Bondho. Dui pallar puran dorja. Chap diye dhorle ekta palla ektu fak hoy. Ta diye vitor er onekta dekha jay. Ami duru duru buke chokh rakhlam sei fake r tarpori. . . amar somosto prithibi ta jeno ek muhurter majhe venge chure khan khan hoye gelo. Amar Tami apa,amar eto adorer misti boro apa ta. Amar boro bon. . . sompurno nogno hoye thay dariye ache ghorer majhe. Ghore tubelight,bulb dutai jolche. Arafat vai khate. Sudhu ekta jangia porone. Fish fish kore ki jeno bolche amar apa take. Apar dike takalam. Vogno,klanto,lojjita amar apa jeno r nijer majhe nei. Soja dariye Arafat vai er chokhe chokh rekhe cheye ache. Mukh ovibetkihin. . . chokh duto veja. Khola chul ese poreche ghare,pither upor. Somosto shorir ghame veja. Duto boro boro daber bishal dudh,uchu mangshol pacha. Gov ir navi. Dudher badami fola fola bota dutar charpashe aro boro badami duta britto. Holud bulb er aloy chokchok korche. Kuch kuch kalo bale dhaka voda. Amar adure priyo apa ta. Amar Tamanna apa. Arafat vai apar hat dhore tene ene tar kole bosalen. Amr thot e chum khelen. Apa jeno mrito. Kono badhai dilo na. Arafat vai apar samne dariye jainga ta khule fellen. 6 foot lomba kuch kuch kalo r shoktishali shorir loktar. Danober moto. Voy kore nogno shorir ta dekhle. Bishal boro,ontoto 9 inchi lomba ekta dhon. Kalo bale dhaka. Dhoner golapi mundi ta peyajer moto. Golapi. Dhoner niche bishal tholi te murgir dim er moto boro duta bichi. Arafat vai dhoner mundida chulte nilen. Mundir cheray sururi dite dite khechte laglen bishal dhonta. Apa kono kothai bolchilo na. Sudhu Arafat vai jokhon apa k tene tar kole boshalo tokhon se osfut sore “Ammu ammu. . . ” bole daklo. Arafat vai apak kole bosiye bam hate apar komor ta shokto kore dhore dan hate apar dan dudh ta tipte laglen. Bota ta buro angul r torjoni diye aste aste muchre dilen. Hater chetoy r buro anguler ghoshay bishal hoye bota ta dariye gelo. Apar mukhe lal ava. Chokh buje thot chepe ache. Chokh diye obiroto jol goracche. Arafat vai apa k ebar shuiye diye apar dan dudh ta chotkate chotkate bam dudh er botay thot ghoste laglen. Bishal kalo mosher moto shorir niye chepe bosechen uni amar misti apa tar nogno shorirer upor. Bam dudh er bota nicher thot diye upore niche ghoste ghoste chok choke lalay bota ta vore jete laglo. Jiv bolate bolate Arafat vai ebar amar boner bota ta chuste laglen. Dan hate vishon jore jore,moydar dela makhanor moto jore jore kochle kochle pishe piche tipchen amar apar dan dudh ta. Majhe majhe dui angule bota ta dhore upore tene dhore dudh take lomba korchen. Dudh niye khelte khelte Arafat vai ebar mukh ta tule apar golapi komol koa thot er majhe dube gelen. Chuste chuste chumu khete laglen. Dui hate mordon korchen bishal dudh duto. Komor nariye nariye bishal dhonta apar tolpete,navir upor ghoshchilen Arafat vai. Ei prothom kheyal korlam amar apatar dui payer run duto vishon mota mota. Tostose.
Sara ghore chumochumir chop chop sobdo r khater kech kech. Apa chumu khete khete fupiye fupiye kadchilo kintu tar mukh theke ekta jantob “Hummm. . . hummm” shobdo ber hocchilo. Arafat vai ebar apa k chere hothat uthe dariye ghorer onno dike shore gArafat vai abar fire eshd apar peter upor pacha ta rekhe chore boslen. Hate ammur narikel teler kouto. elen. Apa bichanay chit hoye hapacchilo. Mukh diye ekta kemon “Heh. . . heh” shobdo. Narikeler kouto ta upur kore Arafat vai onekta tel dhele dilen amar apar buke. Apu sudhu cheye cheye dekhche. Ebar amar boner daber moto bishal bishal dudh duta dui hate chepe dhore chotkate chotkate chepe chepe dudh duta te telmalish kore dite laglen Arafat vai. Bota duto dui hater dui angule dhore majhe majhe tanche. Buro angul diye tip dicche,ghosche dane bame. Upore,niche,dane,bame dhakka mere amar boro boner dudh duta malish korchen Arafat vai. Chot chot shobdo hocche malisher. Majhe majhe apar mukh diye “Ahhh. . . ahh” jatiyo shobdo hocche. Alo pore chok choke dudh duto theke jeno duti thikre berocche. Bota duto hothat vishon jore muche dhorlen Arafat vai!Apa chiktkar kore uthlen. Kintu Arafat vai bota duto muchre dhorei achen. Mukh hashi hashi. Apa “Ah. . auu. . au” chitkar korei jaccheArafat vai bota duto hothat chere dilo. Apa chikar thamiye hapacche. Ebar jhuke pore apar thot duto hothat chuste laglen Arafat vai. Dudh malish tokhono cholche. Dudh duto chotkate chotkate thot soriye nilen Arafat vai. Apa mukh diye “Ah” jatiyo ekta shobdo korlo. Arafat vai ebar apar dudh duto nicher dik theke dhore hothat halka kintu jora jore hater chetor dhakkay apar dudh duta jhakate laglen Arafat vai. Apar mukh diye “A. A. A. A. A. A. . . ” chitkar beriye elo. Chitkar ta vanga vanga. Arafat vai hothat khisti korlen “Khanki magi!Dudhchoda Nadia magi!Tor mai etto boro kemne re?Age to karo choda khas nai. . . “Apa osfut sore kakuti kore ki jeno bollo. Obisasso holeo sotti,ami dekhlam malish r tepon khete khete apar dudh,dudher bota dutoi aro fule fepe utheche. Shurute jotota dekhechilam tar cheyeo besh boro r lal hoye geche. Pichik pich kore teler moddhe hat chalate chalate Tami apar dudh duto malish korte korte chotkate laglen Arafat vai. Apa chotfot korche. . Narikel er kouto ta upur kore amar apar buker upor Arafat vai onekta tel dhele dilenEbar apar dudh duto chere diye Arafat vai mejhete neme daralen. Apakeo tene namalen khat theke. Hatu gere boshiye dilen nijer samne Pray 9 inchi lomba dhonta dhora amar boro boner mukher samne. Shokto,lohar roder moto. . . kuchkuche kalo r bodh hoy vishon gorom hoye tete ache. Arafat vai dhon apar mukhe jor kore dhukiye dite chailen. Apa mukh ta soriye nilo. Arafat vai apar chul muthi kore dhore tan diye mukh ta ghuriye nilen abar. Tami apa bethay chechiye uthlo “Uh!” Arafat vai chibiye chibiye bollen “Khani magi,valo chaile chosh!Noyto khub bipod hobe tor r tor vai er. “Apa kede fello. Kadtei kadtei chokh bujhe dhon pure
Apa chokh bondho kore dhonta chusche. Apar shorir ta jeno olpo olpo kapche. Arafat vai apar chul muthi kore dhore boro boro thape mukh choda korte laglen amar boro bonke. Sathe osrabbo galigalaj r khisti. Mukhe ja asche tai bole chollen amar apa k. “Hey khanki. . . kutti magi,putki mara magi. Tui amar khanki haramzadi. “Apar chokh bondho hole ojhor dharay jol porche. Dhon chuste chustei fupiye kede uthlo amar apa ta. Kannar domoke r mukhe dhoner thape jhaki khacche shorir. Apar mukh dekhi ektu por kemon nilche lal hoye jacche. Bishal dhon ta proti thape apar gola diye pray neme jacchilo. “Chop chop thopas thopas” shobdo r sathe apar mukh diye ekta jantob “Uggg. . . hum. . . kopchop ” awaj. Ami dekhi apa dhon mukhe niye kemon korche. Dom atke aschd amar apa tar!R kichukkhon emon cholle to morei jabe bechari!Pashondotar por o kono vrukkhep i nei!Gongate gongate mukhe thap mere to jacchei boroi goti aro bariye dilo!Mukher vitor dhon er gutay jeno matha alga kore felbe apar. Ami voye pray kede fellam. Amar boro bon take evabe dhoner barite dom bondho kore marbe naki!Apa bataser ovabe hasfash korche. Mukh diye kono sobdoi korche na. Chokher pani goriye porche du gal beye mejhete,dhoner upor. Arafat vai er murgir dim er moton bichi duta bari khacche amar boner thutnite. Vishon jore jore matha ta jhaki khacche. Dom pray jay jay kintu pashondo Arafat shokto hate matha chepe dhon diye guta marche apar mukher vetor! R bodh hoy 5 sec deri holei apa more jeto. Arafat hechka tane apar mukh theke ber kore anlo puro dhon ta. Chuler muthi chere dilo. Apa kat hoye mejhete pore hapate hapate kadte laglo. Ami dekhlam or mukh theke shada shada gejla berocche. Korbanir poshu dourate dourate klanto hoye gele mukh theke jemon fena fena gejla tole thik serokom. Apar mukh ta valo kore dekhte pacchilam na sudhu apar bishal dhamar moto forsha pacha ta dekhte pacchilam. Apar mukh dekha na gelao mukh theke fena jhorche ta bojha jacchilo. Odike apar mukher lalay gosol kore Arafater bishal dhonta chok chok korche. Apar mukher ek fota athalo thutu jhore porlo or dhon theke. Mundi theke thutur ekta lomba athalo dhara jhulche. Dhon ta jeno bishal khepa shar. Rage fusche tar shikar k gethe gutiye fatiye falafala kore marbe bole! Apar dhamar moto dhaus mota nengta pachay dhash kore ekta lathi marlo Arafat vai. Vishon jore. Apa gungiye uthe ki jeno bollo,shunte paini. Ami obak hoye dekhlam Arafat vai er lathite apar pachar mangshe ki opurbo dheu tullo. Mangshol pachar mangsher ki opurbo duluni r lafiye utha. Apar medhin shorirer shorirer shobcheye beshi mangsho or dudhe r pachay. Sara shorire ekfota chorbi na thakleo somosto chorbi jeno eshe joma hoyeche or pachay r dudhe. Ami obak dekhlam Arafat vai er ek lathitei apar pacha ta toktoke lal hoye fule utheche. Ritimoto jokhom. Pachar okhane aste kore toka dileo jeno mansho fatiye finki diye rokto jhorbe!Ami obak hoye gelam. Eto norom amar boro boner pacha ta

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